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99年英语专业八级考试历年全真试卷(改错)

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日期:2006-2-15 10:16:00
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Part Ⅱ Proofreading and Error Correction (15 min)

The following passage contains TEN errors. Each line contains a maximum of ONE error. In each case, only ONE word is involved. You should proofread the passage and correct it in the following way. For a wrong word, underline the wrong word and wri te the correct one in the blank provided at the end of the line. For a missing word, mark the position of the missing word with a “∧” sign and write the word you believe to be missing in the blank provided at the end of the line. For an unnecessary word cross out the unnecessary word with a slash “/’ and put the word in the blank provided at the end of the line.

Example

When∧art museum wants a new exhibit, (1) an

it never/ buys things in finished form and hangs (2) never

them on the wall. When a natural history museum 

wants an exhibition, it must often build it. (3) exhibit

The hunter-gatherer tribes that today live as our prehistoric 1.___

human ancestors consume primarily a vegetable diet supplementing 2.___

with animal foods. An analysis of 58 societies of modem hunter-

gatherers, including the Kung of southern Africa, revealed that one 

half emphasize gathering plant foods, one-third concentrate on fishing

and only one-sixth are primarily hunters. Overall, two-thirds

and more of the hunter-gatherer’s calories come from plants. Detailed 3.___

studies of the Kung by the food scientists at the University of

London, showed that gathering is a more productive source of food

than is hunting. An hour of hunting yields in average about 100 4.___

edible calories, as an hour of gathering produces 240. 5.___

Plant foods provide for 60 percent to 80 percent of the Kung 6.___

diet, and no one goes hungry when the hunt fails. Interestingly, if

they escape fatal infections or accidents, these contemporary

aborigines live to old ages despite of the absence of medical care. 7.___

They experience no obesity, no middle-aged spread, little dental

decay, no high blood pressure, on heart disease, and their blood

cholesterol levels are very low( about half of the average American 8.___

adult), if no one is suggesting what we return to an aboriginal life 9.___

style, we certainly could use their eating habits as a model for 10.___

healthier diet.
答案与详解

1.答案:as→like
【详细解答】as our prehistoric human ancestors意为“作为人类史前的祖先那样”,但是 根据上下文,此处应表达的意思是“像人类史前的祖先那样”,故应该将as改为介词like。

2.答案:supplementing→supplemented 
【详细解答】本句中的分词短语supplementing with animal foods 是定语,修饰 vegetable diet,根据上下文,此处是指“素食被肉食补充”,故应该用过去分词表被动。

3.答案:and→or 
【详细解答】根据上下文,这里的意思只能是三分之二或多于三分之二,所以不能用表示并列 关系的and,而应该用表示选择关系的or。

4.答案:in→on 
【详细解答】on average为固定搭配,意为“平均”。

5.答案:as→whereas/while 
【详细解答】根据上下文意思,这两句话表示的是一种对比关系。故应该改用连词whereas或w hile,引出相反或不同的事实。

6.答案:for 
【详细解答】provide是及物动词,可以直接连宾语,不需要任何介词。

7.答案:of
【详细解答】despite是一介词,其后可直接接名词。

8.答案:half∧→that 
【详细解答】在这里加上that,用来指代前面的blood cholesterol levels,句子结构才完整。

9.答案:if→though 
【详细解答】根据上下文,这里的主从句关系不是条件,而是让步关系,即“尽管没有人建议 我们回到土著人的生活方式,…”。

10.答案:for ∧→a 
【详细解答】本句中的a healthier diet表示一种更加健康的饮食。冠词a泛指“一种或一类”。

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