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WITNESS
Screenplay by EARL W. WALLACE WILLIAM KELLEY
from a story by WILLIAM KELLEY
REVISED DRAFT APRIL 23, 1984
1 EXT. LANCASTER COUNTY, PA. COUNTRYSIDE - DAY (TITLE SEQUENCE) The faces of several young children are presented in CLOSEUP, as they walk TOWARD US across a ploughed field. On the SOUND TRACK, the haunting SOUNDS OF A GREGORIAN FUNERAL CHANT. The CAMERA PANS UP to the faces of older brothers and sisters, then to parents and grandparents. These are not familiar faces, but faces from another age, strong and open. All are dressed in the distinctive clothing of the Amish.
2 EXT. COUNTRY LANE - DAY Through the last traces of early morning mist another group of black-clad figures make their way down a lane.
3 EXT. COUNTRY LANE - DAY
An Amish buggy, black and highwheeled, stark against the landscape, appears, a spirited chestnut in the traces. Framed in the glass window of the narrow buggy is the stern figure of an Amish man in black topcoat and flatbrimmed hat, his bonneted wife in muted colors, the face of a boy, attired like his father, peering out. The horse's breath smokes on the frosty air, the buggy CREAKS on its springs, and there's the rhythmic CLIP- CLOP OF HOOVES on the pavement. 4 ANOTHER LANE
Two Amish buggies reach a crossroads, join a procession of three others. They disappear as the lane wends through a leafless thicket of hickory. 5 VALLEY
A BIG SHOT... now the procession numbers almost a dozen buggies... it is headed toward a distant farmhouse. 6 BARNYARD Where literally dozens of carriages are parked. The horses have been taken from the traces, removed to the shelter of the barn. 7 EXT. LAPP FARMHOUSE - FRONT PORCH
As the black clad mourners begin to move into the house (women and children presumably first). 8 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE
the coffins the upper half open. We see that the worse has been dressed in white linen, a piece of white linen partially covering the bearded face. END TITLE SEQUENCE. 9 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE Partitions have been removed, making the central rooms of the farmhouse a spacious hall. The place is packed, a hundred-fifty or more Amish, all sitting in absolute silence on rows of wooden benches. A wooden coffin rests on a bench in the f.g., and near it the close relatives of the deceased occupy a special Place. RACHEL LAPP A young woman of perhaps twenty-seven. Her face is pale and drawn. In happier circumstances, although there haven't been too many of late in Rachel's life, we would see a robust, sensual woman of full figure, spirit and intelligence. Eight-year-old SAMUEL LAPP flits next to his mother; he would appear stunned, possibly not entirely comprehend- ing events. And the patriarch, ELI LAPP; his stubborn, weathered - yet not unkind - features grief-stricken. THE MOURNERS Their faces... CLOCK as it begins to CHIME nine a.m. FAVORING PREACHER as he removes his hat. As one, the men in the congre- gation remove their hats also. 9 CONTINUED: Then the preacher begins to speak in a formal German dialect: (SUBTITLES OVER) PREACHER ... a brother has been called home. God has spoken through the death of our neighbor, Jacob Lapp... THE FAMILY where Rachel, Samuel and Eli are sitting- SOUNDS of emo- tion and grief not quite suppressed are heard throughout as: PREACHER ... husband of Rachel, father to Samuel, son of Eli. (and) His chair is empty, his bed is empty, his voice will be heard no more. He was needed in our presence, but God needs such men, too. That one should be taken so suddenly. Treat sorrow. Still, we would not wish him back. Rather we should prepare ourselves to follow him. TIGHTENING to the Lapps, and... 10 EXT. CEMETERY
The mourners have gathered about the grave, standing in silence as four pallbearers are lowering the coffin into the pit. The many buggies are aligned in the b.g. As the pallbearers begin to shovel soil and gravel into the grave, the Preacher begins to read a hymn in German ... a slow atonal litany which seems to hang forever on the frosty air. RACHEL TIGHTENING to her as the hymn continues... CUT TO: 11 INT. LAPP FARMHOUSE 11 where the Amish have gathered for the traditional post funeral, midday meals. 11 CONTINUED: 11 Long tables are laden with customary Amish fare ... crocks of soup, hams, fowl, fried boiled eggs and pickled beets, preserves and an infinite variety of pies and pastries. RACHEL Where she sits among women, accepting their condolences. DANIEL HOCHSTETLER A brawny-armed, ruggedly-handsome, raffish looking Amishman. There is something atypical about his face a slightly sardonic set of mouth, a bold eye, a prominent set of jaw. Not exactly what old Jacob Ammann had in mind, maybe, but a well set-up man nonetheless, and at ease among men. He's among a group of men including old STOLTZFUS, the local healer, FISHER, BIEILER and Bieiler's stout young son, Tom. STOLTZFUS Lapp was a good farmer. None better. BEILER But not the man to buy a horse for you. (and) Hochstetler, wasn't it your father sold him that horse with a ruptured testicle? TOM (grins) Told him it was a bee sting made him limp that way. HOCHSTETLER (amused) That horse had one good ball. That's all it takes. The others chuckle. But Hochstetler's attention is still on Rachel. RACHEL as Hochstetler looms on the horizon, plants himself like a tree in front of her. 11 CONTINUED: (2) 11 At ease as he was with the men, he's a bit awkward at this. All the women, very much aware of Hochstetler's availability, tune in as Rachel looks up. HOCHSTETLER I was sorry to hear about Jacob. Let us hope he walks close with God. RACHEL I'm sure he does, Daniel. 12 FIELDS, LAPP FARM - DAY 12 It is some time after the funeral and the Lapp family is hard at work breaking ground for the spring ploughing. The death of Jacob has increased the work load on; all three - Samuel maneuvers a four-mule team while Rachel and old Eli work nearby, further breaking up the earth. Rachel looks up from the back-breaking labor as several figures approach - it's Daniel Hochstetler and two of his brothers. Without a word they fall in beside Eli and Rachel and take up various tasks associated with the work in hand. Daniel works close beside Rachel. 12A EXT. COUNTRY ROADS, LANCASTER COUNTY - DAY 12B A few BRIEF SHOTS of a lone buggy containing the Lapp family take us from the 18th century into the 20th century the reassuring RATTLE OF THE CARRIAGE WHEELS on quiet backroad, to the ROAR OF TRAFFIC as the buggy waits patiently for a chance to cross a busy interstate highway. 12B EXT. HIGHWAY, LANCASTER COUNTY - DAY 12B A huge tractor trailer rig hovers over the frail buggy as it trots down the interstate. The camera cranes up to reveal a procession of vehicles behind the truck for a chance to overtake it. 13 OMITTED 13 14 EXT. PLATFORM, LANCASTER STATION - DAY 14 Daniel Hochstetler moves through the crowd on the plat-form, Rachel turns surprised, as he approaches, a faint color coming to her cheek. RACHEL Daniel?
14 CONTINUED: 14 HOCHSTETLER I...I was at the feed store. And I saw your horse, so... There is an embarrassment between them broken by the arrival of the train. HOCHSTETLER (continuing) You will come back soon? Samuel can barely contain his excitement as he drags at his mother's hand. SAMUEL Quickly, Mothers Quickly! Rachel embraces Eli. ELI You be careful out among them English. She turns to Hochstetler. RACHEL I need time, Daniel.
14A EXT. CARPARK, LANCASTER STATION - DAY 14A Daniel Hochstetler leaps into the driving seat of his open wagon and with a flick of the reins and a whoop sets his horse off at a fast trot.
14B EXT. TRAIN - DAY 14B The ENGINE gives a WARNING BLAST before creeping slowly forward.
15 OMITTED 15
16 INT. TRAIN (MOVING) 16 as Samuel spots something out of the window that causes him to light up. SAMUEL Look, Mama...l
17 HIS POV THROUGH WINDOW 17 A road runs parallel to the train track, and Hoch- stetler in his wagon urges his horse almost to the gallop as he attempts to keep pace with the train.
18 BACK TO SCENE 18 as Rachel smiles. RACHEL I see, darling. And Samuel cranes to look back, waving, for as long as he can. 18A EXT. LANCASTER COUNTRYSIDE - DAY 18A The train moves across a broad panorama of fields, dotted with dolls'-house-sized farms and the tiny figures of Amish farmers working their horse-drawn equipment.
19 SERIES OF CUTS 19 as the train continues its eastward journey... Samuel stares raptly out of the window at the changing pat- terns of the countryside. He points in wonder at a brightly colored hot air balloon as it drifts slowly over timbered hills... he looks unsure as the pattern of field and wood gives way to suburbs, bustling shop- ping centers, restaurants, car lots and fast food outlets.
20 EXT. PHILADELPHIA SLUMS 20 as the train travels past dilapidated row houses, streets choked with cars and the gutters with filth.
21 INT. TRAIN (MOVING) 21 Now Samuel is staring out the window with some confu- sion, almost apprehension: SAMUEL Is this where we're going? RACHEL Of course not. We're going to Baltimore. It's much nicer in Baltimore. 21 CONTINUED: 21 And Rachel draws her son closer, turning her back on the window. 22 OMITTED 22 23 INT. 30 ST. STATION, PHILADELPHIA - DAY 23 Rachel is in a line at one of the counters. The plain dress of the two Amish - particularly Samuel's black coat and hat - are drawing curious stares. SAMUEL He's uncomfortably aware of the shy looks and giggles of a little girl about his own age, standing in line with her parents at the next counter. He edges away from his mother... ANGLE as Samuel comes upon a figure garbed in a long black frock coat and flat-brimmed hat... the man's back is turned, could, from appearances, be an Amishman. Samuel stares... A beat, the man turns to face Samuel and we discover that he is a Hasidic Jew. SAMUEL as he reacts. BACK TO TICKET COUNTER as Rachel's turn arrives. The TICKET SELLER glances up and she shows him her ticket. RACHEL We have a ticket to Baltimore. Where is that train, please? TICKET SELLER Delayed three hours. You'll hear an announcement when it's time to board.
24 CONTINUED 24
He starts to go without his hat, but Rachel collars him and puts it on his head. 25 ANGLE IN MEN'S ROOM 25 as Samuel enters. It's a long row of sinks, urinals, and stalls...Samuel stops before one of the urinals - a long, trough-like affair with water drizzling down the rear porcelain panel. It's set a little high for Samuel, and it is making GLUGGING-FLUSHING NOISES that are, at least, intimidating. Samuel stares for a moment, then turns, looks toward the stalls, stoops to see which are empty. HIS POV - TOILETS beneath the row of doors we can see no feet visible. Samuel is alone in the restroom. BACK TO SCENE as Samuel proceeds along the row of door, finally selects a stall near the end. He enters. As he does so, a heavily bearded youth in a dirty sweatshirt enters. With some urgency, he removes small notebook from his pocket and places it behind a paper towel dispenser. Suddenly he glances up. Two other men have entered the men's room; one is a large BLACK MAN in a three-piece suit under an ex- pensive, overcoat. His PARTNER is a Caucasian in designer jeans, half boots and a short leather jacket. They advance on the young man with unmistakable menace. The young man whirls in terror; his two assailants lunge for him... a savage, wordless struggle ensues in the close confines of the lavatory. ANGLE IN SAMUEL'S STALL as the struggling men bounce off the door of his stall... he can see their feet under the edge of the door. BACK TO FIGHT as the struggle builds to a climax... ends with the young man stiffening with a grunt, his face draining of color. The two attackers step away, the blade in the black man's hand bloodstained. His partner stares at what they've accomplished with a stunned expression: PARTNER Jesus... The young man's hand comes away from his belly covered with blood. He stares at it, staggers toward the sinks. Finally his bloodied hand reaches to smear at his face in the mirror. Then he collapses to the floor. The black man motions for his partner to watch the door, then quickly reaches up and removes the notebook from behind the dispenser. ANGLE IN SAMUEL'S STALL as he edges open the stall door a crack. Over his shoulder we can see the black man, his BACK TO US, rifling the backpack. But beyond him, in the mirror on the far wall, we catch sight of the black man's face. SAMUEL as he stares out the narrow crack. A beat, then he closes the stall door. ANGLE IN STALL Samuel tries to make the latch work, but it's warped and won't fall closed. BLACK MAN as he checks the notebook before placing it in his pocket. His partner is covering the door, an automatic in his hand. The black man makes for the exit, then on second thought, glances at the row of stalls. HIS POV - STALLS All quiet, but... BACK TO SCENE The black man whips out a SR caliber revolver, and, starting at the near end, starts pushing open the stall doors. 25 CONTINUED: (3) 25 ANGLE IN SAM'S STALLS as the black man approaches, Samuel working desperately on the latch. At the last minute he finally wedges it in. BLACK MAN He elbows Samuel's stall...the door won't open. ANGLE IN SAM'S STALL Fighting back panic, Samuel has retreated as far as he can. BLACK MAN as he gives the door a kick. It holds. He swears under his breath. ANGLE IN SAM'S STALL In desperation, Samuel does the only thing he can think of... he slips under the partition into the neighboring stall the black man just checked out. But he loses his hat in the process. His hand snakes back INTO FRAME to snatch it just as the black man gives the door a fero- cious kick that splinters the lock and nearly takes it off its hinges. He's framed there, the big muzzle of the .38 revolver looking down our throats. ANGLE as his partner snaps from the doorway: PARTNER Will you come on, for Christ's sakes!
A beat, then the black man holsters his weapon, turns to follow the partner out.
BACK TO SAMUEL as we hear the SOUND OF THE TWO MEN EXITING the lavatory. A long beat, then Samuel opens the stall door a crack. 25 CONTINUED: (4) 25 HIS POW THROUGH DOOR Samuel's own face reflected in the blood-smeared mirror ... then PANNING DOWN to the still figure of the young man lying in the crimson pool of his own blood on the floor. 26 OMITTED 26 thru thru 29 29
30 BENCH WAITING ROOM - LOW ANGLE - NIGHT 30 Samuel sits close to his mother, his face pale, his eyes staring. Rachel holds his hand tightly in hers as the torsos of various police and officials pass through foreground, occasionally obscuring the lonely couple. There is considerable ECHOING NOISE as commands and requests mingle with the CRACKLE OF TWO-WAY RADIOS. CUT TO: DOOR - MEN'S' ROOM The diffused shape of faces behind the frosted glass of the Men's room door, which is pushed open to reveal, JOHN BOOK, who comes striding through to be momentarily lost in the crowd of police, reporters and others. He is about 40, with a rangy, athletic body. Behind him comes CARTER, Book's black partner - about five years younger than Book. Book is wearing a suit, Carter is much more casually - almost disreputably - dressed. CUT TO: BENCH Little Samuel watching Book, back to crowd of police, as Book questions an old black CUSTODIAN. BOOK You found the body?
CUSTODIAN Uh uh. Not me, daddy, I just reported it. It was the kid. BOOK What kid? 30 CONTINUED: 30 CUSTODIAN How'n hell do I know what kid? The kid in the funny black threads. TIGHT SHOT - SAMUEL Worry-eyed, still staring straight ahead. Then his eyes move suddenly to his left. BOOK'S LEGS - SAMUEL'S POV coming in at full stride, then stopping. SAMUEL He doesn't raise his eyes...just looks at the legs. And, slowly, the legs begin to bend at the knees. We see Book ' s belt buckle, then his big pistol in its holster, then his face. He stares at Samuel for a moment, then... ANGLE - BOOK as his face breaks into a big grin, and... BOOK Hi, kid. RACHEL immediately alarmed, intervening. RACHEL What do you want of my son? THE SCENE as Book takes out his wallet, displays his shield. BOOK I'm a police officer. I'm going to have to talk to the boy. What's his name? RACHEL Samuel. Samuel Lapp. 30 CONTINUED 30
RACHEL then, quickly) But what happened here is none of his affair. My sister is expect- ing me . . . our train is leaving soon. BOOK There'll be another train. (turns to Samuel) The man who was killed tonight was a policeman, Sam. It's my job to find out who did it. I want you to tell me everything you saw when you went in there. SAMUEL (stammers) I saw him. BOOK Who'd you see? Sam looks at his mother. BOOK (CONT'D) Who'd you see, Sam? The man on the floor? SAMUEL No . . . I saw the man who killed him. Book stares at him in surprise, speaks over his shoulder to Carter. BOOK Anybody know about this? CARTER I didn't even know about it. BOOK (back to Sam) Okay, Sam. Can you tell me what he looked like?
SAMUEL (groping, touching his clothes and pointing at Carter) He was . . . like him. BOOK (nods) Black . . . I understand. What else, Sam? A beat, then Sam crosses quickly to Carter, Book's rather slightly built partner: SAMUEL Not Zwartich, like him - Book frowns, puzzled: BOOK Try that one again, Sam - Samuel gives his mother a helpless look; exasperated, Rachel intervenes with Book. She glances at Carter: RACHEL May I talk to you? ANGLE As Rachel takes Book aside, and in a low voice: RACHEL (CONT'D) Zwartich . . It's the way we say . . . dwarf. (glances at Carter) Not like him . . . very big. Book nods, starts to turn back to Sam. Just then a commotion o.s. catches his attention.
31 OMITTED 31 31A BOOK'S P0V - ONCOMING COPS 31A It's Capt. TERRY DONAHUE, Chief of Homicide, striding past the crowd of journalists and TV crews . .. brushing off reporters' questions and snapping orders to the aides he's got in tow: BACK To SCENE As Donahue comes on Book:
DONAHUE (to aides) Close it all down . . . I want a man on every exit . . . I want the lab in here now ! (to Book) And I want to talk to you, Captain. ANGLE As Book steps aside with Donahue . . . In the b.g. Rachel moves protectively to Samuel's side. BOOK All right, talk. DONOHUE This is homicide - not Internal Affairs! So why are you behaving like you own this case? BOOK We were running Zenovitch . . . That's all I can tell you. But I want it, Terry. (then) I've got a call into Schaeffer. RACHEL/SAMUEL They can't help but watch the confrontation between Donahue and Book . . . although they're keeping the volume down, it's obviously intense and angry:
SAMUEL (alarmed) Momma . . . are they angry with us .
RACHEL (reassuring, but hardly in her own mind) No . . . No. It is just the English way.
31A (CONTINUED) 31A Donahue has lost the confrontation; he gives Book a smile: DONAHUE You ought to think about coming back to Homicide, Johnny. . . Stick with Internal Affairs and you're not gonna have any friends left. BOOK (smiles right back) I'll buy a dog. 32 EXT. 30th STATION - NIGHT 32 Book emerges from the terminal, looks about Him, then crosses to a big Mercury Sedan which is parked nearby. Two men sit in the front seat. Book crosses to the driver's side and opens the door. BOOK Go get a cup of coffee, Stan. The driver, a uniformed policeman, glances at the man beside him who nods in agreement. He gets out and Book gets in behind the wheel. 33 OMITTED 33 34 INT. SEDAN 34 Book sits next-to SCHAEFFER, a surprisingly kindly looking man of about fifty. Schaeffer is a Deputy Chief. SCHAEFFER How reliable is this kid? BOOK Oh, he's good. SCHAEFFER Amish. BOOK Yeah.
34 (CONTINUED) 34 SCHAEFFER What have you got? BOOK Zenovitch was about to deliver a list of names ton ight -- street chemists...the guys processing this P2P into speed. SCHAEFFER So one of them got to him. BOOK Maybe. SCHAEFFER You know who? BOOK Maybe. SCHAEFFER You're still convinced there's a link to the department? BOOK If there isn't I've just wasted the last six months.
SCHAEFFER That's the problem. We need results. The press is driving us crazy over this P2P thing. Calling us the speed capitol of the country'. You know the sort of thing . It's getting political. The Commissioner's getting very uneasy. BOOK The Amish boy saw him, Paul. I'll make it, but Set Donahue and the Homicide Department off my back or they'll blow the whole thing.
SCHAEFFER When word gets out that Zenovitch was a cop, all hell will break lose. You've got 24 hours. That's all I can give you. 24 hours on your own. After that the case and the witness go back to the Homicide Department. 34 CONTINUED: 34 SCHAEFFER (shakes his head) Tell you what... why don't you and that blonde - what's-her-name - come over for dinner Sunday. How 'bout that. BOOK What's-her-name moved to Buffalo.
SCHAEFFER (Sighs) Well, anyway, don't get crazy. (dismisses him) I'll do something for Zenovich's wife. 35 OMITTED 35 36 INT. BOOK'S CAR (MOVING) PHILADELPHIA - NIGHT 36 Book drives around 13th Street, a ravaged corridor between neon-lit restaurants, bars, porno shops and darkened storefronts. Carter sits beside him, Rachel and her son in the back seat looking out at the assorted array of desperate characters huddled in doorways or wandering aimlessly about. On the POLICE RADIO a description of the cop killing is BROADCAST EVERY FEW MINUTES. CARTER I got there late, John. BOOK Let's just find Coalmine. (beat) Listen, Zenovich made a mistake. You didn't let anybody down. It happens -- CARTER (grimly) It won't happen again. RACHEL Where are you taking us? BOOK We're looking for a suspect. We've reason to believe he's still in the area. RACHEL You have no right to keep us here. BOOK Yes I do. Your son is a material witness to a homicide. RACHEL You don't understand, we have nothing to do with your laws! BOOK Doesn't surprise me. I meet a lot of people like that.
RACHEL It's not a joke. Book decides to try contrition: BOOK You're right. It's not a joke. Listen, I know a little about the Amish. I know this has to be an ordeal for you; and I'm really sorry you an Samuel got involved. Samuel shoots a look at Book. then mutters something to his mother in German. She responds in the same language. Book frowns. BOOK What was that? RACHEL He wants to know who you are. Your name. I told him we don't need to know anything about you. Book eyes Samuel: BOOK Book. John Book 36A EXT. 13TH STATION - NIGHT 36A Book's car stops ,and from out of the shadows darts a wizened little MAN. He looks about before crossing to the driver's side window.
36B INT. BOOK'S CAR - NIGHT 36B Book lowers the window. BOOK Sammy, where's Coalmine? The little man stares at the weird-looking couple in the back seat.
36B CONTINUED: 36B SAMMY What you got there, the Salvation Army? BOOK Coalmine. SAMMY Try "Happy Valley".
36C EXT. HAPPY VALLEY BAR, SOUTH STREET - NIGHT 36C Book's car pulls up outside the bar and he and Carter get out, and move swiftly inside.
36D INT. HAPPY VALLEY - NIGHT 36D Sixty Black faces stare as the police enter. A hush falls on the group. Book and Carter spot their man at the bar and move up either side of him. They've moved carefully to this point . . . no mistakes. From the back, the black man they've approached certainly looks like he could be the man who did the killing of Zenovitch. And, as Book and Carter make their move . .
36E EXT. HAPPY VALLEY - NIGHT 36E As Book and Carter explode through the door of the bar, violently propelling Coalmine along with them. Now we see Coalmine is not the killer. As Book and Carter escort Coalmine out of the bar a police squad car pulls up, its headlights shining into Book's car. An alarmed Rachel holds Samuel close as Book forces Coalmine's face down next to the car window. BOOK Put some light on him. A cop pulls out a flashlight, begins to play the beam over Coalmine's face. 36E CONTINUED: BOOK (continuing; to Samuel) Look at him. Crazy as Rasputin on speed and booze, Coalmine glares at Samuel inside the car: Samuel, white-faced, finally shakes his head in the negative. Coalmine tries to twist free of Book's grip. Book snaps, and slams Coalmine's skull into the window edge, finally crushing his face up against the front win- dow. His face takes on a grotesque shape against the glass. Carter restrains his partner and Book cools down. Coalmine is led stumbling away by the uniformed police. This sudden show of violence has horrified and angered Rachel, and she glares at Book as he gets back in the car. RACHEL John Book, you listen to me! will have no further part in this, nor will my son! As God stands between us! Book sighs, starts the engine and moves off.
36F EXT. HOTEL - PHILADELPHIA - NIGHT 36F Book pulls up outside a hotel entrance as a uniformed DOORMAN moves to open the rear door.
36G INT. CAR - NIGHT 36G Rachel and Sam recoil as the Doorman opens the door. He is puzzled by the sight of the reluctant guests. DOORMAN Ma'am? RACHEL No! We do not stay in hotels. Book and Carter exchange a glance.
37 OMITTED 37 thru thru 42 42 43 EXT./INT. FRONT DOOR, SUBURBAN HOUSE - 43 PHILADELPHIA - NIGHT An attractive woman in her early thirties in robe and slippers stares in disbelief as Rachel and Sam file into the house. This is ELAINE, BOOK'S sister. She stops Book as he tries to follow Rachel inside.
ELAINE How could you do this to me tonight? I told you I had company BOOK Sorry. It's important. BACK TO RACHEL as she glances in a doorway. HER POV - ELAINE'S KITCHEN It's a shambles, with dirty supper dishes piled sink, the table littered with empty beer cans. BACK TO RACHEL as she hustles Samuel along. BOOK/ELAINE Book frowns: 43 CONTINUED: BOOK Where's Timmy and Buck? ELAINE Upstairs, asleep. Where'd you think? BOOK You've got a man here and the kids are upstairs? ELAINE That's none of your goddamn business! So keep your goddamn holier-than-thou mouth shut! (and) Anyway, they like Fred. BOOK Oh sure, Fred. Elaine looks like she's going to blow again, then decides it's pointless. ELAINE Who are these orphans, anyway? BOOK They're Amish. 44 ANGLE IN GUEST ROOM Samuel is asleep in one twin bed in a tiny, cluttered room. Rachel, in a plain nightgown, is preparing to climb into the other one. O.S. we hear a DOOR CLOSE, presumably Book leaving. A beat, then Elaine opens the door and looks in. ELAINE Everything okay? RACHEL Yes, thank you very much. ELAINE (a beat) John said you're Amish. RACHEL Yes. 44 CONTINUED: ELAINE (blankly) Oh. She nods and goes. Rachel crosses to Samuel, sits on the bed. Samuel looks up at her bleakly. SAMUEL I don't want to stay here. RACHEL They are English. They don't understand. SAMUEL I wish dawdie was with us. RACHEL (swallows) I Know. Sleep now, Liebchien. She puts her hand on his forehead, closes his eyes. she frowns, and...
44a EXT. DRIVE-IN FAST-FOOD JOINT - PHILADELPHIA - DAWN 44A Carter exits the cafe carrying burgers, donuts and a couple of beers. Book wakes from a brief nap as Carter gets into the car. 44B Book chews into his burger while Carter takes a dough- 44B nut. Its clear they've worked through the night. 45 EXT. ELAINE'S HOUSE - DAY 45 Elaine's house is situated on the corner of a row of terraces, which stretch into the distance on both sides of the street. 46 INT. ELAINE'S HOUSE 46 as Samuel comes out of the guest room in his night- shirt, turns up the hall and opens the door to the bathroom. 46 CONTINUED: ANGLE But it's not the bathroom; it's Elaine's bedroom. She and FRED are tangled in the sheets, furiously making love. Elaine gasps, Fred manages to grunt. FRED Wrong door, kid. ANOTHER ANGLE As Samuel quickly shuts the door. A straight-faced beat; then, barely suppressing a giggle, he hurries on... 47 ANGLE IN LIVING ROOM as Rachel appears in the living room entry. Samuel is sitting on the floor with two boys of about his own age, watching television. They're eating cold cereal out of a box. RACHEL'S POV - TV SCREEN Some artless Saturday morning cartoon. BACK TO RACHEL as she frowns, watching her son and the other two staring hypnotically. And... 48 ANGLE IN LIVING ROOM 48 It's later in the morning now, as Elaine, a bit bleari- ly, appears in the entryway, stares in groggy disbelief. HER POV - KIDS Her oldest boy and Samuel are busily washing the win- dows while her youngest is pushing a carpet sweeper. The TV is off. BACK TO ELAINE as she stares. 49 ANGLE IN KITCHEN Rachel is standing in the middle of the now immaculate kitchen finishing a brisk mop of the floor. The coffee is perking. Elaine appears. ELAINE (mutters) Jesus... Rachel turns cheerily. RACHEL Good morning. ELAINE (helplessly) You didn't have to...
RACHEL I wanted to. you were kind to take us in last night. (and) Anyway, I needed something to do. I was so angry with your brothers He's so...aaanisish I ELAINE Aganishish? Yeah, that sounds like John. She takes a seat at the table, still shaking her head. RACHEL Just a minute. I'll pour you some coffee. ELAINE You're not carrying a bullwhip... how'd you manage to put my kids to work? RACHEL (smiles) I made it a contest... the one who does best gets his cereal back first. (and) Children like to help... they only need to be kept after a little bit. Rachel means no harm by this, but Elaine's eyes begin to storm. ELAINE Oh, is that so? (and) No offense, lady, but I'm not so sure I like the idea of your coming in here and turning the place upside down! Rachel's smile fades at Elaine's trembling outburst: RACHEL Please, I didn't mean... Abruptly Elaine rises and snatches the mop from Rachel's hands. She mops furiously as she Continues: ELAINE I know exactly what you meant! Listen, maybe I'm not a world- class housefrau, but maybe I don't have time to polish the goddamn china and keep after the kids! (and) It's none of your business, but I don't happen to have a man around here full time. So I sell cosmetics in a goddamn drugstore and sometimes I can even pay the rent on time! So maybe I'm not Mary Poppins, but maybe I don't need to have it jammed down my throat like this. She finishes the floor, hurls the mop aside with a CLATTER: ELAINE (continuing) There is that clean enough for you? Rachel is speechless, Elaine is on the point of bursting into tears. At which point Fred appears at the entry in his undershirt, taking in the sparkling kitchen. FRED Jesus, Elaine... Somebody die and leave you a broom? Not a politic observation on Fred's part. 49 CONTINUED: (2) ELAINE (blurts) Go to hell, Fred! And, bursting into tears, she flees the kitchen. Fred stares after her. FRED What's bugging her? Unperturbed, he crosses to the counter and the coffee pot, letting his eyes take in Rachel's full figure. 50 INT. ELAINE'S BEDROOM 50 as Rachel comes in with Elaine's coffee, closes the door behind her. Elaine is lying across the bed, sobbing. RACHEL I brought your coffee. She takes a seat next to the bed. RACHEL (continuing) I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way. After a moment, Elaine starts to pull herself together: ELAINE It's okay. (and) Look, I shouldn't have blown my top. It's like... somehow ... I've let everything get away from me. And you sort of made me face it. She takes the cup, sips the coffee. Rachel smiles at a private thought. ELAINE (continuing) What's so funny? RACHEL Fred. The way he looked when you screamed at him. 50 CONTINUED 50 ELAINE (disparing} God, Fred... RACHEL At home you'd never hear a woman scream at a man that way. ELAINE No? Why not? RACHEL You just wouldn't. It's not the Amish way. (then) But I think it would have done me good if I could have screamed at your brother last night. ELAINE Listen, I don't know what's going on or how you got mixed up with him, but don't you let that self- righteous sonofabitch push you around, okay? Rachel smiles. RACHEL Okay. 51 INT. BOOK'S CAR (MOVING) - DAY 51 Book glances irritably at Rachel: BOOK Now what's the problem? RACHEL The problem is I don't happen to think my son should be spending all his time with a man who carried a gun under his coat and goes around whacking people. Book gives her a look: BOOK Whacking? CUT TO: 51 CONTINUED: RACHEL (firmly) Yes. And I also want to leave this city. BOOK Believe me, I'm trying to get this over with as fast as I can. But Samuel will probably have to come back and testify. RACHEL We do not go into your courts. BOOK People who don't go into our courts | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||






